21 Mar

Former:. ' ' 01 xcara tea of sorriso' ' , ' ' milk of fidelidade' ' , ' ' sugar of vitria' ' etc. The pupil gave account to present structures of the culinria prescription, but if he confused in the proposal, since the waited one was to produce a poetry from the structural and composicionais aspects of a prescription. Pupil D Pupil D: Heading of the text: ' ' Cruzeiro' '. Narrative in third person in all the text, of completely impartial form, detaching only the qualities and prestgios of the teams personage. The text if approaches the sort more than prescribes of what of the sort poem due to absence of you rhyme, estrofes and verses. However, the pupil structuralized its text in two parts, Ingredients and Way of Preparation, as in a prescription, substituted products of the prescription for elements related to the sport, but did not take care of to the proposal in the question poetry.

Pupil and Pupil E: Heading: ' ' Soup of sentimentos' '. The heading is well sujestivo for a poem-prescription and the literal structure if it approaches to the sort prescribes. The text is separate in two groups, Ingredients and Way of Preparation, as if it characterizes a culinria prescription, however does not take care of how much to the proposal, that is to produce a text poetical to apartir of the prescription. Pupil F Pupil F: This pupil gave to its text the heading of ' ' My Orgulho' '. One is about a text very elaborated well, however, was what less it took care of to the expectations in what says respect to the proposal. The production was not come close nor to the prescription, nor to the poem. The pupil intended to give a homage to the teams and not to construct a poetical text from the literal and structural elements of the culinria prescription.